Below are the tasks with notes turned in by Sydney.
I don't expect everyone to do as thorough a job as she has done, but you can use it as a general term of EXCELLENCE that goes beyond minimal requirements.
COMMENTS: are your notes efficient in recording the salient moments of the texts you are reading/watching? Do they also contain your personal reactions and observations? What did you learn from this example?
Sydney Galdames
Assignment due February 26th
Task 1: "Late assignments and / or assignments
that do not meet format requirements will not be graded."
Task 2: Take notes on lecture video
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Professor starts speaking of “Son of Italy “ by Pascal
DeAngelo
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The book is an autobiography, or a story simply about your own
life
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“biography or who you are at the time of your work”
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We give different interpretations for some of the acts that
occur in our life
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gives example of a first teenage relationship
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Our perspective changes with time
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Our experiences changes, and the way we would write about
those events would change as well
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“thing happen without a reason”
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“we see the consequences of our paths”, “because I did this,
this happened”
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we must find logic and a narrative
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“we discard the elements of our lives that do not fit into our
self-perception”
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Example of shoplifting, and how we would include that when
describing who we are
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Pascal was initially illiterate, and over time was able to
understand and write English
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speaks of his adventures and hardships
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focal point: attempt to make sense of his life
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Shakespeare quote about life signifying nothing, chaos that
you cannot control
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First page of the book speaks of the earliest memories of his
life, there is structure in the very
first page
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First memory is when his grandmother died, speaks of a time
where is got his grandmother onions.
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First memory is about a lost he experiences
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He was a frightened child, and events occur without his
control
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He feels defenseless
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One peculiar character is a woman called “the vampire”
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Mentality of traditional societies, pre industrialization
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World is full of magical spirits
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He has to assign a reason for the things that are occurring in
order to help himself (ex- child falling sick and dying)
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Professor recommends to practice DEEP READING, aka- reading
slow, or out load to yourself
in private
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Focus and underline pieces of work you find interesting, and
make connections!
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Retain the things that provide tools to develop our own
understanding of this text, make effort and read slowly to see a difference
Task 3: READ Son of Italy pp 1-98, Write notes and
summary (not just the plot, include personal observations)
-(pg 7) D'Angelo speaks of his first memory, one of his
grandmother telling him to get the onions for dinner. D'Angelo's first memory
is of a woman who pasted away, this may signify a strong relationship between
them.
-(pg8)
D'Angelo speaks of how his family used to curl up in odd positions just to
sleep on the same bed.
- He
mentions a storm one night, the rain was falling onto his face and it was
freezing.
(I can only imagine how startled he must have been, it is
a very sad thing that a little boy had to experience this kind of mess just in
order to get some rest)
-( pg8) D'Angelo also mentions how he fell off of his
parents bed quite frequently because of the lack of space, he says “Avery
narrow bed it was. Almost every night I fell, having my head continuously
decorated with swollen spots about the size of a full ripe cherry.”
-(pg 10) D'Angelo tells a story about a child getting
hurt, and him being blamed for the child's injury. He says that his own parents
would not defend him against the little boys parents so there was no use in
fighting the repercussions. He says “ I could not go home because I had no
protection there.” (This quote is extremely sad, as a child my mother would
always defend me before she even knew the situation. It was always nice to know
somebody had my back and that makes me feel sorry that young Pascal felt
helpless).
-(pg
16) D'Angelo gets home to realize that he is not in trouble and that the blame
fell on the right boy.
Pascal
is thankful but still upset so he sobs out loud.
(I too have cried tears of relief as a child, sometimes
children create so much anxiousness where it is not necessary).
-(pg 19) “This man had been know as a sort of wizard.
He lived alone and had nothing to do with the world” (I am curious what Pascal means by this man
being a “wizard”?)
-(pg20)
the “wizard man” was struck by lightening right in front of Pascal and his
mother
-(pg22) Pascal first entered school at the age of seven
years old (I myself entered school when I was only 4 years old).
-(pg24) Pascal stopped going to school at the age of 12
in order to work and get money to help out the family
-(pg25) “We were very poor people. We rarely had meat,
and our food was of the poorest kind. Yet we were happy.” ( This quote is very
meaningful and beautiful to me, as I too growing up was poor. My mother was on
food stamps when I was a child because my dad had left and was not supporting
me. My mother worked very hard to provide for me, and my childhood was still a
happy time in my life regardless. People do not consider the importance of
relationships in children's lives and how a strong family relationship can
benefit a child tremendously for the rest of their lives.)
-(pg27)
Pascal speaks of witches, wizards, and vampires. These people to him are so
terrible that he must pretend they are not fully human in order to accept it.
(I now realize why he called the man who got struck by lightening, a wizard).
-(pg33)
Pascal speaks of a sick baby who could not get better with medicine that was
provided. Pascal says “In our valley a baby who cannot be relieved from an
immediate illness will be at once classified as an innocent victim of the
vampires.”
( This quote
just reinforces the belief that when these people cannot come up with an
explanation for terrible events, they blame a make believe source to cope. )
-(pg
41) “her eyes seemed to gaze through me as through a crystal to some point far
beyond. Beyond the skies”
( when I read this quote I imagine this woman to be blind.
I have worked with blind elderly people before, and they have this same gaze
when you speak to them. It always makes me feel a little sad when I am speaking
to someone who is blind and I realize that they cannot see the faces of people
who speak to them.)
-(pg47) the mother says “I cannot blame him. He works
so hard and never seems to get any better” (This quote to me is the sad truth
behind the middle/lower class of people living in America today. Unfortunately
sometimes no matter how hard you work, the rich just seem to keep getting
richer while the poor keep getting poorer.)
-(pg53) D'Angelo describes the crying wife with her
“multitudinous tear” and I can visualize this woman and her sobbing.
-(pg59)
Pascal describes a woman looking at him with a sense of pity in her eyes. He
said that “he wondered if he should stand up and bow to her”.
( this line is very sad to me, that a young boy felt
the need to bow down to a woman because she was looking at him like he was less
than, or unfortunate.)
-(pg62-64) Pascal describes the men in the town. The
men all sound like decent people, who are not involved in any suspicious
activity. Even though these men are nice guys, I'm sure they will be
discriminated against because they are immigrants.
-(pg69) Pascal describes the American woman as fat and
ugly, I wonder if she really was “ugly” or if Pascal has a sort of resentment
towards the americans, because they were not nice to him.
-( pg78) A gold chain in America was only 49 cents.
Pascal was shocked to hear how cheap gold was in America, much like I was to
read that gold was only 49 cents!
-(pg84) The banana price is 3 for one penny. That is
quite a bargain
-(pg88) Matteo is in a fight with an American boy and
things get ugly. When they go to the police station, the officer is treating
Pascal and the others with no respect, even telling them to shut up.
-(pg 93) “In a sonorous Neapolitan dialect” I did not
know what sonorous meant until I googled it. It means “deep and full sounding”
-(pg98) finally after searching for three more men to
share the fee with them, the guys are on their way to a new job. Things are
looking up for the Italians.
Task 4:
(xviii) – The introduction speaks of lynching, and why
is it that the lynching of African Americans is the only thing that comes to
mind when we hear the word “lynching”. Why is it that schools only teach about
this specific group of people, and not of the other minority groups that deal
with lynching? ( It is a very strong argument, and I myself am also unsure as to
why schools do not teach us about these lynching’s, I believe it is
discriminatory against the Italian immigrants and their history.)
(pg 6) –“Massacre at Aigues-Mortes, in the Camargue, a region of southern
France” -A large number of Italians were killed in France, due to people
competing for jobs.
(pg
9)-
“Bloody explosions of brutal wickedness are now to be found in
states like Washington, Georgia, Illinois, Massachusetts, Delaware, Indiana,
Alabama and Virginia. The phenomenon is now beginning to worry even Americans
who still do not seem to be fully conscious of the shamefulness of such
barbaric acts.”
(How ironic, many Americans STILL to this day turn their heads
and pretend to not be affected by barbaric acts that happen. What comes to mind
is the killing of innocent black men by police officers, and many people
pretend that there is nothing wrong with this.)
(pg13)- “The most
common argument used to justify lynching was the almost total certainty that
the victim was guilty”
(I believe that this argument is faulty. It is the same
argument people jump to conclusion these days, without ever finding out if a
person is “guilty” or not, lynching is brutal and inhumane.)
(pg14)- Tampa Bay Times refers to the lynching of the two Italian
men as “a lynching and a lesson” , How disgusting is that ! A public newspaper
feels secure enough to publish such hateful words.
(pg 21) - “A rigid and uniform norm on naturalization was
imposed on the states only after the lynching of five Italians in Tallulah.”
(Of course it was imposed only after the murder of five
Italians)
-Money was distributed to the families, as if that was going
to heal their broken hearts from losing their loved ones!
(pg22)- In the case of the
lynching’s, the Americans would try and claim the immigrants already had U.S
citizenship in order to prevent the Italian government from defending them.
How sneaky and disgusting of
them.
(pg 28)- “the New
York-based Italian newspaper L’Araldo screamed its outrage against the acceptance
of indemnification by Italian Minister of Foreign Affairs Prinetti, accusing
him of a “state crime” and attacking him with never-heard-before words”
(I am glad that the Italians living in America had some type
of news source to defend them at that time. I am surprised America didn't try
and shut it down.)
(pg 36)- “This is history that for the longest time many tried
to erase.”
(I completely agree with this quote, it is so completely
accurate when discussing lynching in general, but especially the lynching
against the Italians. Before this class I had NEVER heard of the lynchings of
Italian men.)
(pg 44)- “The atmosphere had become even more tense after the
acquittal a few weeks earlier of an American citizen who had killed an Italian,
defined by the Progresso as “the poor Tironi.”
(This quote reminds me of NYC after the acquittal of the
police officer that killed Mike Brown, and the police officer that killed Erik
Garner. The hostility on the streets was insane, and the anger soon
unfortunately turned into the murder of two police officers, this was a time I
will never forget living in NYC.)
(pg 50)- “Corte wrote in a letter to the ambassador — only to
a point the irritation of the population and the bloody outburst, but I cannot
understand how the educated class could become the leader of such a shameful
assassination.”
( It is a hard lesson in life to learn that sometimes
education and logic can hold NO power over ignorance and racism. This is a
lesson I myself have learned very well since the election of Donald Trump.)
(pg 55)- “In particular the New York-based L’Eco d’Italia, in
a special edition issued immediately after the news of the lynching on March
14, 1891, came out with the headline 7 Sicilians butchered in New Or- leans,
reporting with horror the killing that took place following the not-guilty
verdict.”
(I am glad that the L'Eco d'Italia published this information
right away after the lynching. The people deserve to know the truth, and they
deserve to know it ASAP.)
(pg63)- The acquittal
of the officer is described to have “happened with premeditation and with the
complicity of law enforcement officers.” That does not surprise me at all, it
almost seems obvious, and that is quite scary.
(pg63)- The quote given by
Mr. Corte is what I had predicted would happen before I read about it. In order
to silence the cries of the Italians, the Americans took away their voice by
forcing Mr. Corte to leave. Corte stated ““I am now threatened by a request for
my recall by the United States government”. As a punishment for acting openly
and undiplomatically in defense of the Italian colony, the consul was
“sacrificed”
(pg73) - A very powerful
quote that stuck out to me was a quote by Saint Martin, he said “This acquittal
represents a danger for the future. It is universally
known that the New Orleans lynching was the consequence of the acquittal of the
murderers of Chief of Police Hennessy, an acquittal that was obtained in a way
similar to the recent one, and that was considered a success for Mafia.”
(pg 77)- Italians were given the worst of the worst job
positions. They were desperate for money so they did what they had to, but when
compared to white people the Italians were struggling. This reminds me of some
Mexican immigrants I see around NYC. They work so hard day in and day out,
while white men complain that they're stealing “our” jobs, jobs that the white
man would NEVER apply for.
(pg83) – The events that occurred in Colorado are explained.
An American man was murdered and an Italian man named Lorenzo Andino
immediately confessed. He and five other men were arrested, but before they
could get to the prison they were gunned down. Two of the men were arrested and
when in prison they were attacked and killed. Regardless of if these men were
criminals themselves, the prison guards did not uphold the law and the killers
avoided detection from the guards.
(pg94)- “three defenseless Italians whose safety should have
been guaranteed by this Country’s justice system.” The key words in this quote are “should have”
unfortunately the rights these men were entitled to be not given to them, just
because of their ethnicity.
( pg98)- Describing the events in New Orleans there is a quote
that talks about the incident. “Over three hundred armed people removed the
three prisoners and hanged them from the trees in the prison’s courtyard. Still
not satisfied, they started looking for the other two. They found them and they
hanged them in a slaughter- house nearby.” This entire description makes me
sick to my stomach, it is so painful to imagine.
(pg106)-“recommends that we
inform privately and confidentially our counterparts that if the
American government offered
an indemnity to the Tallulah victims’ families, the Royal
Government would not consider itself authorized to deprive
them of such benefit.”
(pg107)- Describes the situation in America to be
rather embarrassing. Embarrassing is a polite way of describing the shadiness
of the U.S
(pg110)- “The truth was that, by asking for the standard
indemnity of $2,000 for each victim” $2,000 is not good enough for the murder
of a family member of mine. There is no price tag on human life.
( pg113)- L'Alrado said in a interview that the lynching in
America was an incurable disease. Lynching in America was eventually “cured”
but other discriminatory killing still occur today.
( pg116)- Minister Prinetti-
“This is in line with the traditions of the South where lynching is not
considered a crime and where anyone trying to track down the assassins would be
exposed to the danger of re- prisals.”
(pg117)- “The minister also underlined a new aspect that made
this case even more egregious than the previous ones: the Italian victims had
not been charged with any offense” I did not know the definition of “egregious”
so I looked it up and it said it meant “outstandingly bad” which makes complete
sense in the sentence.
(pg128)- “We also know that the filthy savagery of the America
people will not drop the enjoyment of killing Italians.” This would change eventually, due to the hard
work of these men, continuing to fight the discrimination against the Italian
people.
(pg 138-139) – The event that
occurred in Mansura Louisiana is described “his house was targeted by a volley
of bullets shot by several firearms that left forty or fifty bullet holes in
the walls. The boy and three other young Italians living in the house survived
by throwing themselves on the floor.”
-This event was started out of pure jealousy that the Italians
were successful and they were not.
(pg145) - The event of what happened in Pittson, PA are
described and it mentions that “The citizenship immediately reacted with
threats of lynching.” The fact that lynching was used to threaten criminals is
super unethical.
(pg 151) - “They have thrown stones against trains and finally
there was the attempted killing of Joe Cosio, a Spaniard, who was mistakenly
identified for his brother who is vice president of the manufacturers’
association.”
(pg 152)- “The description of the lynching and the plan set in
place to actuate it constituted a major accusation against the lynching mob but
most of all against the public authorities that did nothing to prevent it”
(pg160)- However, once it was determined that one of
the victims was a foreigner, the federal authorities had the right and duty to
act directly and take serious, punitive measures” Punitive: Intended as
punishment
(pg 163 )- Cusani stated that ““the weak spot of our protest
in comparison to the New Orleans lynching, when it could be proven directly
that the police was at fault.” And I would definitely have to agree with him.
They should have fought more to prove the police were guilty.
(pg 168)- “After several
cases of lynching of foreigners remained unsolved, the federal government felt
the need to take the jurisdiction over these crimes away from the local courts
and from local prejudices.”
-Finally! What took so long to decide this?
(pg171)- “The statistics
presented by Senator Gallinger showed that just in 1901 there were 135
lynching’s, not a very high number in comparison to other periods, such as
1892, when there were 235 lynching’s.”
-It is crazy to me that there
was a time where 135 lynchings was considered to be “not a very high number”,
it's very sad and eye opening to see these numbers.
Thank you very much, I appreciate the kind feedback about my work! I will be sure to keep these notes as my permanent template for future assignments.
ReplyDeleteGood job!
DeleteWow, great job Sydney! These notes are so amazing I never really imagined ever taking notes this thought out. I believe I am a good note taker myself, before I started reading Son of Italy I actually googled tips on good note taking just because I did not want to miss any important details. When I come across an interesting quote while I am reading I would jot it down and write why I think it is important. I also do include a lot of my personal reactions. For the last assignment when we needed to write notes on pages 1- 98 I wrote a lot about what I learned about the characters which I think is very important to do so you can really understand the characters throughout the whole book. Something that I need to work on I believe is summarizing more in my notes. I think it will help me understand what has happened in that chapter or those couple of pages instead of re-reading or skimming that part of the text again. I will definitely use Sydneys notes as a template for future assignments , thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteJokingly: no, please don't imitate Sydney too closely. It took me for ever to read her work. If everybody did the same I would not have a life anymore! FGC
DeleteWhen taking notes on a text, I like to aim for a clear structure that will enable me to understand the text on a deeper level. Sydney has succeeded in that regard; her notes are a perfect blend of summary and analysis, making it easy for the reader to pick up on the most important themes, instances, and ideas in the text.
ReplyDeleteWhile I do feel that my notes captured the most important aspects/themes evident in SON OF ITALY with ample personal reactions/observations provided to support them, I realize that my notes can definitely be shorter in length to eliminate any "fluff" and irrelevant information that might be present in my notes. By doing this, I will stay concise and to the point, which is what Sydney was able to accomplish through her notes above.
I do believe that my notes are efficient, but at the same time I think that they would be improved if I gave my own thoughts and feelings on what I am reading. I should also focus on only including important notes and not just events that happen. That way, I would get the point much faster and would make my notes more valuable for my final thoughts and conclusions.
ReplyDeleteI received an A on this assignment, and the only thing the professor noted was that maybe I should put page numbers next to my notes. I don't think that would work for me, as I have already noted which Chapters go with what set of notes I have written. This is the way I have always organized my notes, and what works for me. Sydney did do an amazing job, though.
ReplyDeleteSydney's work is wonderfully detailed and includes many of her own reactions to the story. I believe my notes are pretty efficient but after reading Sydney's work I am inspired to include more of my own personal reactions. i]I think if I do this, it will help me remember more of what happened in the book because I would be relating it to my own personal experiences and thoughts.
ReplyDeleteSydney went over and above with this assignment. She completed each task with thorough note but also commented on those notes adding her personal opinions, and reactions to the information. This is another piece of work written by a fellow classmate who's work I will use as a template for my future assignments.
ReplyDeleteGreat job, Sydney! Honestly, I think that my notes are nothing comparing to Sydney’s. She did great job expressing her own and authors feelings in her notes. I did not do good job at it, my notes are more on summary of the chapter and there are little my own feelings. I feel that I write a lot in my notes but I am not sure if they are efficient.
ReplyDeleteI really like how Sydney took what was happening in each text and brought her personal response as well as questions or concerns she had as she read. I think that we all do this while reading a book or other work but Sydney's work is a documented example of that for us. Very impressive.
ReplyDeleteI have always been an efficient note taker and am satisfied with how I organize my notes. I usually write down the main concept of the page and any emotion associated with that event. I like how Sydney included her personal observations and comments with her notes. She did an extraordinary job. That is one thing I did not do when taking notes. It is better to reflect upon what is happening in the text so we get the whole gist of the content when we read. I will use Sydney's example in my future note taking to include my personal comments and observations.
ReplyDeleteGreat, detailed notes Sydney. I do think that my notes are efficient, and help me understand the text from both a microscopic view, as well as the broad perspectives hidden within the text. I find myself emotionally connecting to the text, and that definitely drives the direction of my note taking. After analyzing Sydney's assignment, I could relate to my initial notes in that she writes notes per page. I learned that there is no such thing as too much detail, as I thought I was doing in the beginning.
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