Thank you, Yasmin.
You identified Paul's inner conflicts about sex as one of the crucial phases in his development. He is frankly confused if not terrified by it, and is loaded with a sense of guilt. (This is later reinforced by the discovery that Nazone frequents prostitutes and has an STD.) It's a very interesting analysis: this subtext and its connection to Paul's inner dynamics is often ignored. FGC
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“Louis –haven’t you-don’t you believe in God?”
…..“There is no God”(134)
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“Paul, the job is not freedom. Your wonderful
brain is freedom…” (134)
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“…and our bodies are no longer meat and bone of
our parents, but substance of Job.” (136)
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“I do not need God in my house!” (147)
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“He was proud that God had given him he was
proud that God had given him hand, back, and eye to bring home food, proud that
he earned almost as much as the thick-wristed men, proud that he studied
blueprints and construction, proud that he felt beauty in his form and soul,
proud of his wonderful family.” (157)
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“Their obscenity gripped his eyes and chilled
his senses.” (161)
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“Oh mother mother I have desire great desire for
woman and my only will is for Gloria’s fruits…I cannot tell you-I must never
let you know…” (169)
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“The scaffolds rose a floor a day. With each
floor the height and majesty of skyscraper fascinated him, but he never told
mother Annunziata about the danger of falling or being pushed from a swinging
scaffold forty or fifty floors above the street.” (173)
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“They reconstructed the beautiful terrain of
Abruzzi and tenderly restored their youths and the times of Fiesta and
Carnival.” (187)
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“Nineteen Twenty-Nine! The building boom lay
back-and disappeared.” (199)
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“…and in their bewildered minds hunger and the
fear of hunger set in as quick disease – weakening flesh and pounding sanity.”
(199)
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“You are my own; the time has come for me to
show myself like you always asked me in your prayers which I have always heard
since I was sent for by my loving Lord by whose right hand I stay.” (202)
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“Paul looked over the scaffold rail and through
staring mouth and eyes sent out his soul to catch his godfather who flung out
his arms and rested on the speed of space that sucked him down.” (208)
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“Every disfigurement of his godfather echoed in
Paul with lightning flashes, shuddering and crushing him. His tongue shrunk.”
(209)
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“Boys….there’s a lotta mortar in the mixer and
tubs that’s gotta be used up. There’s a hundred brickies and sixty hodcarriers,
and overhead.” (210)
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“Paul remained by the shattered Nazone. A flame
shot through him. That is your father Geremio!” it cried, “Your father! You!”
(210)
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“I was
cheated, my children also will be crushed, cheated. His father begins to
absolve and sighs faintly, Ahhh, not even the Death can free us, for we
are…Christ in concrete… (215)
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“His face frightened her. She took the crucifix
from the wall and placed it in his hands….he pushed the crucifix aside and
stared into her eyes.” (216)
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“Silent he returned. Silent he remained. And a
trembling came to Annunziata. If only he would speak.” (217)
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“There was something in his face, and her voice
was now powerless.” (218)
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“Ah no, today’s Job had choked him – but let him
live. Tomorrow he would die.” (218)
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“O life do not kill me before I have freed my
heart-!” (219)
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“I only know that I am cheated.” (220)
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“Mama, you must stay - you have not lived - and
soon the kids will be big- mama, please, food or no food - we shall live and
laugh – we will be gay and dance differently – we will laugh and laugh and
laugh oh how we will laugh…laugh…” (225)
Task 2: Write an essay about how Paul’s eventual loss of
faith in Christ-God eventually kills his mother.
Paul is first thrust into the care of his family after his
uncle too gets hurt on the job and is no longer able to help Annunziata and her
family out. Paul is a very young boy who now has to take on the
responsibilities of an adult. He not only has to grow up mentally and
emotionally but his body also has to take on the pain and labor of an adult in
a young man’s body.
Paul’s experiences on the job all lead him to eventually
question and ultimately lose faith in God. First, he gets a job with the
corporation and they take advantage of his age and pay him far less than most.
He later gets another job as a bricklayer and although it takes a huge toll on
his body, he is proud to be able to provide. On page 157, we see that “he was
proud that God had given him hand, back, and eye to bring home food, proud that
he earned almost as much as the thick-wristed men, proud that he studied
blueprints and construction, proud that he felt beauty in his form and soul,
proud of his wonderful family.”
We first see Paul grapple with his physical desire for women
and how that directly interferes with the way he was raised. His first thought
is how he cannot tell his mother about these desires. He says “Oh mother mother
I have desire great desire for woman and my only will is for Gloria’s fruits…I
cannot tell you-I must never let you know…” (169). The idea that somehow his
physical desire is wrong and he associates that with his mother’s teachings is
very telling.
We later see Paul take another job in the steel industry
where he works with his godfather on big jobs such as skyscrapers. At first he
feels very powerful and finds the job thrilling in a way. A large part of this
is due to his age and the idea that when you are young, you are invincible.
His godfather becomes very nostalgic and wants to go back to
Italy. He talks about going back home and begins to distance himself from the
job and their everyday responsibilities become a burden to him. One day as they
are going to work, Paul’s godfather asks him to not go to work. They eventually
do go for Paul is afraid of losing the job. Later in the day there is an
accident on the job and his godfather falls 20 floors to his death.
This incident devastates Paul as he was very close to his
godfather and he begins to question everything – especially his faith. After
this incident he see his father in a vision and he says to Paul “I was cheated,
my children also will be crushed, cheated. His father begins to absolve and
sighs faintly, Ahhh, not even the Death can free us, for we are…Christ in
concrete… (215).
Paul begins to think about his own death and to wonder when
it will come to him. He loses faith and no longer sees the purpose in
worshipping a God that allows for so much suffering.
Task 3: Take notes of the film Give Us This Day.
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The film begins with the future and shows
Geremio coming home looking very disheveled and upset.
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He walks in the house and Annunziata is very
upset. She tells him to leave and go “back to her.” His kids come in and sing
him happy birthday and his son Paul wants to show him the radio that he made
for him.
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Geremio then leaves without seeing Paul’s radio.
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The film then goes back in time to show us how
this first scene came to be.
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We meet Geremio at his work site and get a sense
of the danger that is faced by the workers in their daily work.
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Geremio almost dies as a result of an accident
on a skyscraper that he is working on.
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We are also introduced to Geremio’s group of
four friends that he shares everything with.
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We see that they hang out together at a bar and
that Geremio has a girlfriend who is American. He cares for her and they are
together often.
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We later see Geremio asking his girlfriend where
she thinks this relationship is going. He clearly wants more commitment than
she is willing to give.
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She questions his job and ability to provide for
his family and we see them part ways.
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Geremio later talks to his friends and he
decides that he will marry a girl from Italy and make a home.
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He marries Annunziata right after she comes to
be with him. This reminds me of the movie The Italian that we saw.
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He promises her a house of her own and she is
ecstatic about it.
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However, Geremio cannot afford to buy a home and
he instead rents it for three days without telling Annunziata the truth.
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She gets very upset and is very disillusioned to
have to live in a tenement.
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They then make a pact to never lie to each other
again and decide to save to buy the house they want – they will need $500 to
purchase the home.
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Unfortunately, work is very hard to come by and
it takes them a lot longer to do this. They also have 4 children in between!
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Around the birth of the children we see the role
of superstition come into play a lot more – the scene with the eyelashes comes
to mind.
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They come across a point where there is no work
and they must choose who gets the next job – they collectively choose Julio for
that one.
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Geremio is also growing farther apart from
Annunziata and the pressures of not being able to provide are mounting.
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He decides to go back to his ex for a while and
cheats on Annunziata with her.
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Here I am very surprised to see this because in
the book, there is a great deal of love and respect for family between Geremio
and Annunziata and he just did not strike me to be the type to do this.
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It is this scene where he remembers that
Annunziata wanted him home for dinner and it is his birthday that he goes home
and we understand why he hits Annunziata and leaves home.
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Geremio then comes back to Annunziata and
apologizes for his wrong doings and begs Annunziata to take him back. She does
and they start anew.
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Later Geremio is approached by a manager to work
a new job as his foreman. Geremio is very hesitant because he sees that in
order to save money, the manager cuts a lot of corners and the job is not safe
at all.
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Geremio later decides to take it anyway in order
to feed his children.
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He gets into a scuffle with the rest of the gang
and he starts to feel the pressure of the job on his conscience.
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They later make up and decide to try their best
to make the site safer to work under.
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Unfortunately their attempts are futile and the
building collapses over them and they die.
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Annunziata is later found to be at the courts
trying to get help for her children and the courts rule to give her $1,000.
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She says “finally, Geremio has managed to get us
a house” – a very sad ending indeed.
Yasmin,
ReplyDeleteI especially liked the point you made in the essay regarding Paul's desires, and how they stray from his mother's teachings. I did not place much emphasis on the sexual theme in CHRIST, and I am seeing now that I probably should have- this longing and desire towards Gloria is the sin that plays a crucial role in Paul's ultimate departure from religion. Very glad you brought that point up, and it is something I will look for again in the book.
Like Brandon I also did not put much emphasis of the sexual theme in the book and the role it played in Paul's disregard of God. Since reading Yasmin's work I feel like i missed a HUGE point and I feel bad for not speaking about this in my paper. Yasmin's work was very clear, concise, and thorough and I will try my best to analyze the text as in depth as Yasmin did.
ReplyDeleteI didn't even really notice a sexual theme in Christ, so I really appreciate that you pointed this out, Yasmin. I also feel like I missed a huge point. I know that he desired Gloria, but I didn't really view his sexual desires as a theme in the overall context of the story.
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ReplyDeleteYou did a wonderful job analyzing this text and jotting down quotes that were important to you. I did not take into consideration how important the theme regarding Paul's conflict with sex. I do recall the whole situation with his friends and Gloria but I did not realize that it made a whole new theme to concentrate on.
Great job Yasmin,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your quotes and descriptive notes on the movie. I see a comparison between the quotes that you wrote and the ones that I thought to be the most important also. As others have stated, the connection between Paul's struggle with his sexual desires and trying to stay "Holy" is an important part of Paul's story.
Excellent work Yasmin! Aside from neatly organized note taking on the book and context, the quotes were well interpreted, important highlights of the book, and executes the task to the core. As I read the book, I noted pages that contained quotes that I thought were relevant and important for the entire meaning of the book itself. I saw a similarity in chosen quotes of Yasmin to the ones I noted in my book. The essay, wonderfully written as well!
ReplyDeleteGreat work, Yasmin. Thru reading you notes and answers I found it to be very interesting, I really could understand the book from your notes. And I also did not pay too much of attention to Paul’s sexual desire and meaning of it. You did very good job of describing it and now I see different picture in my mind about it.
Yasmin did a great job analyzing the text and responding to the tasks. I liked her interpretation of Christ in Concrete in that Paul is starting to explore his sexual desires and that they exist. This is something that I missed while reading the book but now that I think about it, there was a lot of information in the book pertaining to this time. Her choice of quotes was also great and had a clear pattern about what she found important in the book. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThank you all very much! I really enjoyed the many layers that this book had and Paul's desire for Gloria was just one of those layers. However, I felt that it was important because it marked the first struggle of many that Paul will be faced with throughout the book.
ReplyDeleteGreat work Yasmin! I really like how detailed and informative your notes are. I also like the quotes you chose to mention from Christ in Concrete, many of them i had overlooked, but after reading your work i see how vital they actually were to the text. I definitely agree that the sexual theme in Christ contributed to Paul's loss of faith.
ReplyDeleteGreat job,
ReplyDeleteI think it is great how you pointed out the sexual theme both for Geremio and for his son Paul. Your notes show a clear connection between the two, and are valuable for understanding the characters as a whole, rather than just people that one would pity.
Yasmin notes are extremely detailed and efficient. I like how he took many quotes from the book. I too find this a very effective way to take notes. Additionally, I agree how the sexual theme has played a role in Paul's faith.
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